dsalvo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[When Im With You - F-777]

good stuff

at :36 the piano get really high. you might want to reconsider writing that on a lower octave, or different instrument.

at 1:30 crescendo the strings in, and when they play out, decrescendo them.

2:14 would be my best part if you were to bring back the full orchestra. it seems like the song gets quickly dead after the percussion.

These are just suggestions, i still love the song ;)

[SP - Generic Dance Song 3 V4]

great song

you said be critical, so here it goes.

i believe that you you are using fl7 or 8, which is fine, but find a piano that will not reverb like it is doing right now. it seems like the piano is in a slightly smaller room.

Maybe try a triple kick and a double kick instead of a single and double?

Good stuff.

Steven-Polley responds:

fl9 mang why would i be using 7 or 8 when theres free upgrades?

I put the reverb and delay on the piano myself, I could probably spend more time fine-tuning it though.

thanks :)

[CKC - Grime Town]

Good Stuff

It has an original flare to it, which is great considering that it was made with fruity loops. (i am right, right?) No one can blame you for using the drums that come with the program. the sound is great.

CKC2009 responds:

yh FL man.. i acuallu used some other beats not from the progmamme :P

[Fall]

awesome

10/10
5/5
one suggestion is to add an orchestra in the back ground at the climax of the song that is a octave higher than the normal. it think it will set it for epic.

Cayler responds:

That's a very good idea :)

[Reflection of Water {7x}]

i agree

the ending needs work. other than that i like the swells the song has. you repeat, but it doesn't sound boring. keep up the good work.

EbonHawk7X responds:

thanks =D

[Mortal Kombat ( Hip Hop Remix)]

Good Stuff

I think that it would be cool to try the beat on a lower octave so you can get some natural bass out of the song. i think you might have been going to for the more hip-hop dirty style which would be a octave lower if it sounds cool. keep up the good work. give my suggestion a try, it might completely suck, or be epic.

supezkalel responds:

thnks man ill giv it a try

[So Gangster (official Remix)]

Master it please

it might be a great beat, but its audio is massively clipped, please fix and I will re-review it.

[Lollipop Reeeemixxx]

i don't get what you were trying to do

It seems out of sync, and really like you were trying to go for that, but it just looses it like-ability. it also seems like you played this and didn't sync this with your drums. I am not voting on this yet until i made my complete decision. But I just listened to it 3 times and I think that i am starting to get it maybe?

cjhgb4 responds:

one day u will understand.. YOU ALL WILL!!11

[Hide and Seek {Techno Mix}]

so much better than the original

awesome, really nice mastering.

fishfood2021 responds:

Thanks :)