at :36 the piano get really high. you might want to reconsider writing that on a lower octave, or different instrument.
at 1:30 crescendo the strings in, and when they play out, decrescendo them.
2:14 would be my best part if you were to bring back the full orchestra. it seems like the song gets quickly dead after the percussion.
These are just suggestions, i still love the song ;)
you said be critical, so here it goes.
i believe that you you are using fl7 or 8, which is fine, but find a piano that will not reverb like it is doing right now. it seems like the piano is in a slightly smaller room.
Maybe try a triple kick and a double kick instead of a single and double?
fl9 mang why would i be using 7 or 8 when theres free upgrades?
I put the reverb and delay on the piano myself, I could probably spend more time fine-tuning it though.
It has an original flare to it, which is great considering that it was made with fruity loops. (i am right, right?) No one can blame you for using the drums that come with the program. the sound is great.
yh FL man.. i acuallu used some other beats not from the progmamme :P
one suggestion is to add an orchestra in the back ground at the climax of the song that is a octave higher than the normal. it think it will set it for epic.
That's a very good idea :)
the ending needs work. other than that i like the swells the song has. you repeat, but it doesn't sound boring. keep up the good work.
I think that it would be cool to try the beat on a lower octave so you can get some natural bass out of the song. i think you might have been going to for the more hip-hop dirty style which would be a octave lower if it sounds cool. keep up the good work. give my suggestion a try, it might completely suck, or be epic.
thnks man ill giv it a try
Master it please
it might be a great beat, but its audio is massively clipped, please fix and I will re-review it.
i don't get what you were trying to do
It seems out of sync, and really like you were trying to go for that, but it just looses it like-ability. it also seems like you played this and didn't sync this with your drums. I am not voting on this yet until i made my complete decision. But I just listened to it 3 times and I think that i am starting to get it maybe?
one day u will understand.. YOU ALL WILL!!11
so much better than the original
awesome, really nice mastering.
I don't know whats with all of the 1 bombers
maybe the drums could be stronger but it a mainstream rap artist put some lyrics to this i bet you they would be sucking his ....... anyways, i thought it was great, nice bass in the beginning, would have like to see it hit as harder through the song i think the repetition makes people want to just forget about it. Lyrics would have really helped this effect go away like at the end. get someone to rap this !
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