at :36 the piano get really high. you might want to reconsider writing that on a lower octave, or different instrument.
at 1:30 crescendo the strings in, and when they play out, decrescendo them.
2:14 would be my best part if you were to bring back the full orchestra. it seems like the song gets quickly dead after the percussion.
These are just suggestions, i still love the song ;)
you said be critical, so here it goes.
i believe that you you are using fl7 or 8, which is fine, but find a piano that will not reverb like it is doing right now. it seems like the piano is in a slightly smaller room.
Maybe try a triple kick and a double kick instead of a single and double?
fl9 mang why would i be using 7 or 8 when theres free upgrades?
I put the reverb and delay on the piano myself, I could probably spend more time fine-tuning it though.
It has an original flare to it, which is great considering that it was made with fruity loops. (i am right, right?) No one can blame you for using the drums that come with the program. the sound is great.
yh FL man.. i acuallu used some other beats not from the progmamme :P
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